Dear Friends, this poem is dedicated to all the people who are mentally challenged. I have tried to put their unconscious feelings in this poem.
Yes I am
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.
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I am mentally retarded, mentally challenged or
whatever you say
to designate
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.
intellectual disability
They say that I don't have a normal life
A sensation to breathe, An emotion to build a relation;
however, they will never understand that
.
.
.
For me this crowded world seems too vacant
to have a thoughtful companion to touch my heart.
to have a thoughtful companion to touch my heart.
my empty eyes always keeps expressing; proving the virtue of my sentiments;
no matter if there is nobody to feel it...
my desiccated lips always keeps smiling; enlightening the importance of a burly life;
No matter if I cannot live it...
I just stay firm with my unfulfilled desires;
discovering
the true meaning of
MY EXISTENCE
- Nutan Ghatge
Really nice poem Nutan...
ReplyDeleteSuch people also have feelings.. I did not know..
Its great. The thoughts in this poem are all true and i think everyone wants to live life like this but being mentally fit no one wants to try this things or they will be included in this categories. Keep on doing like this poems, feels good to read like this poem. Very Good
ReplyDeleteThank You Saurabh and Akshay
ReplyDeleteNice poem filled with great feelings :)
ReplyDeleteKeep it up :)
Manjushree
khupach chan...
ReplyDeleteWat a heart touching poem.......filled my eyes wid tears!!!!!!!!!!!!keep it up.
ReplyDeleteChan Lihilas bar Nutan... Assach Lihit raha...
ReplyDeleteThank You so much All
ReplyDeleteVery nice nuntan !!!
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